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Derelict

Derelict - Albert Berg This is a fairly decent sci-fi / horror short.

The author does a good job capturing the atmosphere of the derelict ship and does put together a scary scenario.

I don't usually comment on grammatical or spelling errors unless they impact the overall story. But, as they have been addressed by others, I thought I would point out that errors were not as damaging as I originally thought they would be based on earlier reviews. Interestingly, most of the errors are clumped into a couple of paragraphs that are back-to-back, as if whoever did the editing just skipped a page or two.

I am rating this one 3 STARS with a bias towards 3 1/2.